Updated Animatic

For this updated version of my animatic I have addressed some of the issues that I didn't feel were working from the first draft.

• I added a textured background wall to the first sequence to explore what it might add to the piece, I think it helps to give some context to the action.
• For the sanding and painting sequence I had, before producing the first storyboards, imagined it as an overhead shot but I struggled to visualise this at first, wrestling with the idea of making it as readable as possible. With feedback from Ed, I returned to my original idea for this animatic and am pleased with the results.
• From the first animatic it became apparent that for the film adaptation I would need to signify the learning that the Melancholic Wife takes on that enables her to overcome and access her power in the last sequence. In consultation with Sadhbh, we decided that we would explore the concept of her taking one of the ghosts with her, accepting this avatar of her teenage self into her arms as she's swallowed by the blackness.
• The final scene has also been changed for this version. Now the Melancholic Wife emerges from the dream space through a door created from the light of her self expression. She re-enters the 'unromantic walls of her real life', a space signified by objects and ephemera from the comic stories, 'striving to hold on to the nuances of her transmutations' by taking up a pen and journal.

The Melancholic Wife Storyboards - Third Sequence

The Melancholic Wife's foot impacts the wooden floor and the reverberations pulse down upon her, pushing her low and causing her to run to escape the pressure of the remembered embarrassment.

McVerry Trust Film Treatment

McVerry Trust

Dwayne – Home for Good

Short Film treatment

The screen fades in from black and we see a photo album sitting on a flat background. The front cover of the photo album is decorated in a key motif, an oval in the centre of the cover contains an illustration of a highly stylised key. A pattern radiates outwards from the oval in strips of warm colours to convey a sense of security and familiarity. The front cover of the album opens by itself to reveal a photo on the first page. Each photo in the album sits on its own page and has its own border evoking a physical picture frame.

‘I was in a hostel........’

The first photo contains a cut away view inside a hostel, we see two floors of separate rooms in silhouette with a silhouette of a person moving around in each room. The silhouettes are all a single colour. The border of the photo is bright and summery, yellows and oranges, optimistic and hopeful.

‘I can have my family over here now...’

The page turns and we see the next photo which is a panoramic view of a room filled with silhouettes of people standing and mingling over food and beverages. The silhouettes of the people in this photo are different colours, jewel tones or pastel shades. Dwayne stands in the middle of the room taking it all in. The photo border is autumnal in tone; gold, rust red and brown, harvest festival feeling, people gathering to celebrate the positive result of hard work.

‘Cause when you’re in hostels....you can’t have anyone over’

The page turns and the next photo just contains Dwayne by himself in a bare, sparse room. The photo border is cold blues and greys, evoking winter, isolation.

‘I’m able to get me daughter and bring her over...It means everything’

The page turns again and we see a photo of a young girl. The frame is vibrant greens, yellows and pinks. It’s springtime, time for growth. Hands reach down and pick the photo with its frame from the album page. We zoom out and we see it’s Dwayne, he has the photo in his hands and he reaches up and hangs it on a wall containing lots of photos of himself and his family. He places the photo of his daughter in the centre of the arrangement.

Fade out.

McVerry Trust Visual Reference

Professional Project - Visual Reference Part One

McVerry Trust Dwayne - Home for Good

This is the video of Dwayne and we've been asked to create a short animation from his dialogue, specifically from the twenty-second mark to the fifty second mark, excluding Christmas.

I wrote out a transcript from the video to get a greater sense of the meaning attendant to the words. Dwayne's repetition of the phrase 'having (someone) over (to visit)' was very strong, which gave me the idea of trying to visually represent a form of overcoming, travelling over an obstacle.

A narrative thread emerged for me beginning in a hostel then moving to his home with his family then returning to a memory of isolation in the hostel then returning home but this time just with his daughter which to Dwayne 'means everything'.

The Melancholic Wife Storyboards - Second Sequence

We travel into the memory ignited by the Melancholic Wife's dancing, it was a time in her teenage life when the floors of her home underwent a transition from carpet to wooden floorboards, changing the dynamic of her previously personal dancing.